For this week’s Tanka Tuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge Colleen has encouraged us to compose a freestyle/free verse or syllabic poem using at least 3 words from the list of 100 random generated words below. I chose rambunctious, dysfunctional & disturbed and the syllabic form of symatrelle as it’s served me well in the past! Hope ye enjoy the read! ππ€ππ
RAMBUNCTIOUS RHYMES; DYSFUNCTIONAL DEMANDS
He is a little rambunctious
Some say, dysfunctional and disturbed
I pray, that he’s not too perturbed
Been without his father since the age of six
Has never settled because he doesn’t mix
Acts up so that they keep having to up sticks
And move. Certain problems that you can’t fix
His behaviour is now uncontrollable
His weary mother is inconsolable
He is a little rambunctious
Should you wish to participate in the prompt then you can access it through the following link: πππ
https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/01/31/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-305-1-31-23/
I loved this Ken! Well done. Great use of the words!
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Ah, thanks so much Colleen, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ
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I aooo agree Colleen! π
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I love creativity, Cindy. Ken did a wonderful job! π
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I so agree and he really did! π
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This was a fun challenge. I love when we have to think about our word choices. π
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Same here Colleen, makes it more interesting! ππ―π
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Yay! I like βa challenge.β π
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Thanks very much Colleen and Cindy, you’re all most kind! πππ
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this is so awesome Ken.. I agree with Colleen! π
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Thanks a million Cindy, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ
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I did enjoy it, Ken. You turned three words into something special! β
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Thanks a million Michelle, really kind of you to say! πππ
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I say it as I see it. π You are welcome, a million times. π
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And I am most grateful for that! ππ
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Oh so well written my friend
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Thanks very much Sadje, really appreciate it! πππ
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Itβs my pleasure
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Hehe! A little rambunctious is an understatement! To be so bad that you must move away from an area sounds like there needs to be some intervention for his poor mother and he needs to face the consequences of his actions! As for the poem – it is a lovely symatrelle and works so well with this topic!!
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Quite an understatement indeed Muri! πππ I was hoping not so much of an understatement as to spoil the enjoyment of the poem. And I think I’ve managed that! π€ππ Yeh, the symatrelle definitely does compliment it! π―π Thanks very much for your feedback Muri and delighted you enjoyed it! ππ
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Aw, poor kid! Great poem, Ken!
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Thanks very much Yvette, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ
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Realism in poetic form sounds wonderful! I liked it.
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Thanks very much, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ
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Great poem and story within.
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Thanks very much D. L. Delighted that you enjoyed it! πππ
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I’ve always liked the word rambunctious. I’d like to get to the root of his story. There are reasons for such things. My brother was like that and he had the rambunctious beaten out of him π¦
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Yeh, there’s something about the word alright Jade! ππ―π There are lots of reasons why. Some we will never know.
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Nicely done!
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Thanks very much Bridgette! πππ
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Great words Ken π
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Thanks very much Angela, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ
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