For this week’s Tanka Tuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge, Colleen has invited us to to compose a poetic response to the picture below taken by Terri Webster Schrant over at secondwindleisure.com for her weekly Sunday Stills Photo Challenge.
MAGICAL HIDEAWAY; TRICK OF REFLECTION
Water bubbles & froths
While steam rises
A strange concoction brewing underneath
Appearing to transform into a shade of green
A magical hideaway?!
Signs of new life emerging?!
Or just a trick of towering trees
Sloping down into the lake
Reflected.
Should you wish to participate in the prompt then you can access it through the following link below: πππ
Beautiful lines!
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Thanks very much, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ
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My favorite element. You captured the image so beautifully!
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Thanks very much Kristian! πππ Appreciate the feedback & delighted you enjoyed it! ππ
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Water, indeed! Where would we be without it? To refresh our bodies & senses! ππ¦
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Yes!! I always feel much calmer when I am in or near it!
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Same here! ππ Waterfalls; sea by beaches; showers; glass of water etc.
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Reblogged this on https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thanks very much for the reblog OIKOS! πππ
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Nicely done!
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Thanks very much Dwight! πππ
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You are welcome!
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I love the imagination in this!
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Thanks very much Luanne, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ
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Nice descriptive poem – and you ask all the right questions! Nice one Ken!
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Thanks very much Valerie, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ And appreciate the feedback!
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Love the questioning. I really wonders so. Thanks for the lovely words.
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Thanks very much Selma, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ
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This is beautiful, Ken. Don’t forget when you write a freestyle poem to add a syllabic form along with it. π
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Thanks very much Colleen, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ Yeh, sorry about that. Just realised after I posted it that I forgot to add a syllabic poem with it. Truth is I struggle with them.
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I know, at first it seems foreign but once you start thinking in syllables it becomes easier. Try the American cinquain 2-4-6-8-2 syllable count. I’m always amazed what my brain conjures up from that form. Don’t be afraid to play. The Japanese forms have all the rules. You might like the Abhanga 6-6-6-4 syllables with end rhyme line 2 and line 3. π
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Thanks very much Colleen, appreciate the advice. πππ I’ll try out those 2 forms that you mentioned. ππ
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Thanks, Ken. Let me know if I can help you in any way.
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Will do! ππ
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I suppose I should add that it isn’t always easy to add a 2nd poem to it due to time constraints and needy kids. But I will try to do so next time Colleen, thanks again! πππ
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I know Ken… I have a job and a disabled husband too. We raised five kids! Why do you think my hair is white? LOL!
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πππ I hear ya Colleen! Much respect to you! π€π€πͺπͺππ
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Same to you Ken. β€οΈ Dadβs need some respect too!
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Perfectly captured Ken β€
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Thanks very much Angela, appreciate that! πππ
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You are so welcome Ken π
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It depends on what enchantment you’re under π I like the atmosphere your questions bring.
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Oh my, Ken, you discovered and described the very essence of this seasonal waterfall with your poetry. Once it stops snowing here, they will start letting water out and it will fall as a chocolate brown river for a few days then it turns dark green.
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Wow, thanks very much Terri! πππ Delighted I hit the nail on the head for ya on the seasonal waterfall! ππ
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So evocative, giving the reader the sense of being there.
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Thanks very much Willie, delighted you enjoyed it! πππThanks very much for the feedback! π
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Lol a pleasure but please call me willow βΊοΈ
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Oh dear, looks like autocorrect was playing games with your name as I was typing it! ππππ Sorry Willow! ππ
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Not a problem I guessed that but could not resist π
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No worries, it sort of invited a reply. Ha! π
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I love the idea of a magical hideaway! Great poem, Ken!
Yvette M Calleiro π
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Thanks very much Yvette, delighted you enjoyed it! πππ
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